Black Ghost

Hmm....I'm not sure what to say. Would catch my eye, I guess, before I exclaimed "WTF?" XD Quiet Winter

9/10 Funny!

Here's one from an actual novel! Yes, that makes it even more disturbing... "Interesting. The force of gravity is 9.8 meters per second squared on this planet, but not in ...

Hey, kirstybree! Interesting romance story so far, and I really like the voice that you use, it let's us really get into your characters head. Beyond that, here are a ...

I really, really enjoyed the books. They were all very engaging in my opinion. Except for the last one, I couldn't quite get through it really. *shrugs* I don't know. ...

Meep, I think the tiny screen is better. It eliminates distractions, and the urge to go back and read over/edit what you've already written. It totally works for me, and ...

9/10 Nice. :P

Definitely some kind of romance, but a very dramatic and heartbreaking one? I'm not sure, but it sounds like soemthing that would surely fall into some kind of romantic sub-genre. ...

I don't crit poetry much, but I liked the way you used batteries as a metaphor for life. It worked, at least for me, and it's an interesting way to ...

I finally saved enough money to buy one. It's a neo, and I got it off Ebay like Kel. I'm still waiting to get it, but one thing's for sure, ...

That's so awesome! Now I have something else to procrastinate with! >.< MM

8/10 I like the pose.

[spoiler]Yeah, the way that they got into the chamber was a bit weird. I guess I just ignored it because there was so much else going on. But really, how ...

Read "Techniques of the Selling Writer" by Dwight V. Swain. That's all you'll need to know. Really. MM

His collection seemed so very small, he didn't often get the chance to get the chance to make marbles, and he hadn't been able to get his hands on one ...